[IPsec] John Scudder's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev1-algo-to-historic-08: (with COMMENT)

John Scudder via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 07 December 2022 15:10 UTC

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Date: Wed, 07 Dec 2022 07:10:19 -0800
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Subject: [IPsec] John Scudder's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev1-algo-to-historic-08: (with COMMENT)

John Scudder has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev1-algo-to-historic-08: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Nits
- “A few notably” should be “A few notable”
- “an addition Security Context selector” should be “an additional...”
- s/standarized/standardized/

[IPsec] John Scudder's No Objection on draft-ietf… John Scudder via Datatracker
Re: [IPsec] John Scudder's No Objection on draft-… Paul Wouters