Re: [IPsec] John Scudder's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev1-algo-to-historic-08: (with COMMENT)

Paul Wouters <paul@nohats.ca> Wed, 07 December 2022 15:33 UTC

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From: Paul Wouters <paul@nohats.ca>
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Subject: Re: [IPsec] John Scudder's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev1-algo-to-historic-08: (with COMMENT)
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On Wed, 7 Dec 2022, John Scudder via Datatracker wrote:

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> COMMENT:
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> Nits
> - “A few notably” should be “A few notable”
> - “an addition Security Context selector” should be “an additional...”
> - s/standarized/standardized/

Fixed locally, will be in -09

Paul