Re: [ippm] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-deployment-02: (with COMMENT)
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From: "Frank Brockners (fbrockne)" <fbrockne@cisco.com>
To: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [ippm] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-deployment-02: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Lars, Happy New Year! Thanks a lot for your review - and sorry for the delay. We've just posted a new revision https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-deployment-04.txt which is to address your comments. Special thanks for running the draft via your nits tool. All the suggestions were really helpful. There is one that I'd need a bit of help with: The boilerplate code included is driven by <rfc category="info" docName="draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-deployment-04" ipr="trust200902"> In order to get the "Revised BSD License" boilerplate text - which ipr reference am I supposed to use? Please see inline. > -----Original Message----- > From: Lars Eggert via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> > Sent: Monday, 12 December 2022 12:47 > To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org> > Cc: draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-deployment@ietf.org; ippm-chairs@ietf.org; > ippm@ietf.org; tpauly@apple.com; tpauly@apple.com > Subject: Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-deployment-02: > (with COMMENT) > > Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-deployment-02: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email > addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory > paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling- > ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-deployment/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > # GEN AD review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-deployment-02 > > CC @larseggert > > Thanks to Maria Ines Robles for the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > review > (https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/A39Rwii1B-f8X3VfnjmdQ2Iz_6k). ...FB: Thanks - Ines' comments are reflected in revision -04. > > ## Comments > > ### "Abstract", paragraph 1 > ``` > In-situ Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (IOAM) collects > operational and telemetry information in the packet while the packet > traverses a path between two points in the network. This document > provides a framework for IOAM deployment and discusses best current > practices. > ``` > Since this document is not a BCP, it might be better to > rephrase "discusses best current practices" as "gives deployment > guidance" or something like that. ...FB: The fact that the abstract should not sounds like a BCP has been mentioned by several reviewers. The abstract now reads: " This document provides a framework for IOAM deployment and provides IOAM deployment considerations and guidance." > > ### Section 3, paragraph 4 > ``` > An "IOAM transit node" updates one or more of the IOAM-Data-Fields. > If both the Pre-allocated and the Incremental Trace Option-Types are > present in the packet, each IOAM transit node will update at most one > of these Option-Types. A transit node does not add new IOAM-Option- > Types to a packet, and does not change the IOAM-Data-Fields of an > IOAM Edge-to-Edge Option-Type. > ``` > If each node can unilaterally determine which of the two option types > to update, how will the eventual receiver of this information be able > to come to a consistent view of he signaled information, if two > different values are present in a packet? ...FB: It isn't really the job of the receiver (the decapsulating node) to make sense of the information in the packet. It would be up to a network management station, or similar which would need to fit the different pieces of data into an overall view. The section has been updated to clarify that fact: An "IOAM transit node" updates one or more of the IOAM-Data-Fields. If both the Pre-allocated and the Incremental Trace Option-Types are present in the packet, each IOAM transit node will update at most one of these Option-Types. Note that in case both Trace Option-Types are present in a packet, it is up to the IOAM data processing systems (see Section 6) to integrate the data from the two Trace Option-Types to form a view of the entire journey of the packet. A transit node does not add new IOAM-Option-Types to a packet, and does not change the IOAM-Data-Fields of an IOAM Edge-to-Edge Option-Type. > > ## Nits > > All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose > to > address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by > automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there > will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you > did with these suggestions. > > ### Typos > > #### Section 1, paragraph 1 > ``` > - leveraged where mechanisms using e.g. ICMP do not apply or do not > - ^ > + leveraged where mechanisms using, e.g., ICMP, do not apply or do not > + + ^ + > ``` ...FB: Corrected. > > #### Section 3, paragraph 1 > ``` > - an IOAM domain, e.g. using for example packet filtering methods. The > - ------------ > + an IOAM domain, e.g., using packet filtering methods. The > + + > ``` ...FB: Corrected. > > #### Section 7.2, paragraph 1 > ``` > - encapsulation mechanisms. Similarly, the sematics of the IOAM-Data- > + encapsulation mechanisms. Similarly, the semantics of the IOAM-Data- > + + > ``` ...FB: Corrected. > > #### Section 7.3, paragraph 1 > ``` > - is expanded at every IOAM node that addes IOAM-Data-Fields. "Pre- > - - > ``` ...FB: Corrected. > > #### Section 10, paragraph 5 > ``` > - are subject to IOAM encpasulation and the rate of exported traffic, > - - > - it is possible to cofine the impact of such attacks. > + are subject to IOAM encapsulation and the rate of exported traffic, > + + > + it is possible to confine the impact of such attacks. > + + > ``` ...FB: Corrected. > > ### Boilerplate > > Document still refers to the "Simplified BSD License", which was corrected in > the TLP on September 21, 2021. It should instead refer to the "Revised BSD > License". ...FB: See above. Which ipr reference am I supposed to use? > > ### Outdated references > > Document references `draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-flags`, but that has been published > as `RFC9322`. > > Document references `draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-conf-state-07`, but `-10` is the > latest available revision. > > Document references `draft-gandhi-spring-ioam-sr-mpls-02`, but `-08` is the > latest available revision. > > Document references `draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export`, but that has been > published as `RFC9326`. ...FB: Corrected. > > ### Grammar/style > > #### Section 4.1, paragraph 2 > ``` > s for generic IOAM data include geo-location information (location of the no > ^^^^^^^^^^^^ > ``` > This word is normally spelled as one. ...FB: Corrected. > > #### Section 6, paragraph 2 > ``` > elds. IOAM-Namespaces support several different uses: o IOAM-Namespaces > can > ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ > ``` > Consider using "several". ...FB: Corrected. > > #### Section 7.1, paragraph 3 > ``` > -Data-Fields in one layer are independent from IOAM-Data-Fields in another l > ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ > ``` > The usual collocation for "independent" is "of", not "from". Did you mean > "independent of"? ...FB: Corrected. > > #### Section 7.1, paragraph 3 > ``` > tionship, in IOAM, layers are independent from each other and don't assume a > ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ > ``` > The usual collocation for "independent" is "of", not "from". Did you mean > "independent of"? ...FB: Corrected. > > #### Section 7.2, paragraph 3 > ``` > ta-Fields does not exceed the MTU of any of the links in the IOAM domain. In > ^^^^^^^^^ > ``` > Consider simply using "of" instead. ...FB: Corrected. > > #### Section 7.3, paragraph 1 > ``` > tays within the bounds of the MTU of any of the links in the IOAM domain. Th > ^^^^^^^^^ > ``` > Consider simply using "of" instead. ...FB: Corrected. > > #### Section 7.3, paragraph 1 > ``` > as to ensure that the minimum MTU of any of the links in the IOAM domain is k > ^^^^^^^^^ > ``` > Consider simply using "of" instead. ...FB: Corrected. > > #### Section 7.6, paragraph 3 > ``` > Proof of Transit Option-Type (Section Section 4.2) is used for verifying the > ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ > ``` > Possible typo: you repeated a word. ...FB: Corrected. > > #### Section 7.6, paragraph 5 > ``` > single LAN, but span multiple inter-connected sites (for example, using an o > ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ > ``` > This word is normally spelled as one. ...FB: Corrected. > > #### Section 8, paragraph 2 > ``` > revent IOAM traffic from leaking outside of the IOAM domain, and prevent IOA > ^^^^^^^^^^ > ``` > This phrase is redundant. Consider using "outside". > > ## Notes > > This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use > the > [`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into > individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT]. > > [ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md > [ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments > [IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool > > Thanks again for your review. Cheers, Frank
- [ippm] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-i… Lars Eggert via Datatracker
- Re: [ippm] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ie… Frank Brockners (fbrockne)
- Re: [ippm] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ie… Frank Brockners (fbrockne)