Re: [ippm] RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-conf-state-10

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Tue, 13 December 2022 16:48 UTC

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Date: Tue, 13 Dec 2022 11:48:27 -0500
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Donald
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On Tue, Dec 13, 2022 at 11:46 AM Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hello,
>
> I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft.
> The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related
> drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes
> on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to
> the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please
> see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir
>
> Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it
> would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last
> Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through
> discussion or by updating the draft.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-conf-state-10
> Reviewer: Donald Eastlake 3rd
> Review Date: 13 December 2022
> IETF LC End Date:
> Intended Status: Standards Track
>
> *Summary:*
> Choose from this list...
>
>    - No issues found. This document is ready for publication.
>    - This document is basically ready for publication but has nits that
>    should be considered prior to publication.
>    - I have some minor concerns about this document that I think should
>    be resolved before publication.
>    - I have significant concerns about this document and recommend that
>    the Routing ADs discuss these issues further with the authors.
>
> *Comments:*
>
>    - Please supply an overview of the draft quality and readability.
>    - Include anything else that you think will be helpful toward
>    understanding your review.
>
> *Major Issues:*
>
>    - Major issues are the type of concerns that will result in the
>    document being blocked until they are resolved. The Routing ADs will become
>    involved.
>    - Please include all of the major issues you have found. Give as much
>    context information as possible (e.g., section numbers, paragraph counts).
>    - If you find no major issues, please write: "No major issues found."
>
> *Minor Issues:*
>
>    - Minor issues are concerns about clarity or technical accuracy that
>    should be discussed and resolved before publication, but which would
>    normally be resolved between the authors and the reviewers.
>    - Please include all of the minor issues you have found. Give as much
>    context information as possible (e.g., section numbers, paragraph counts).
>    - If you find no minor issues, please write: "No minor issues found."
>
> *Nits:*
>
> Section 1, page 3:
> OLD
> Furthermore, each IOAM encapsulating node needs to establish NETCONF
> Connection with each IOAM transit and IOAM decapsulating node, the
> scalability can be an issue. NEW
> Furthermore, each IOAM encapsulating node needs to establish a NETCONF
> Connection with each IOAM transit and IOAM decapsulating node, so
> scalability can be an issue.
> Section 1, Page 4/5:
> Thanks,
> Donald
> ===============================
>  Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
>  2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA
>  d3e3e3@gmail.com
>

[ippm] RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-ippm-i… Donald Eastlake
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