Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-10
review-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-10-genart-lc-even-2022-10-06-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2022-10-10 | |
| Requested | 2022-09-26 | |
| Authors | Tony Przygienda , Chris Bowers , Yiu Lee , Alankar Sharma , Russ White | |
| I-D last updated | 2022-10-06 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -05
by Michael Richardson
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Roni Even (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Rich Salz (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/1PMylVc5PaNdrcE0wQha6gtSPuw | |
| Reviewed revision | 10 (document currently at 12) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2022-10-06 |
review-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-10-genart-lc-even-2022-10-06-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2022-10-06 IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-10 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The documents is ready for publication as an experimental RFC with nits Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. in sections 4.2 and 4.4 I think that the length field is always 5. so why not specify this value. 2.In section 7 second paragraph I am not sure what is the meaning of "very very corner case". is it a unique case or a rare case or just a corner case? also should there be a comma after "only" so it should be "only, in which ..." otherwise I am not sure what the sentence means.
