Telechat Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-12
review-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-12-intdir-telechat-winters-2022-12-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Telechat Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2022-11-25
Requested 2022-11-01
Requested by Éric Vyncke
Authors Gaurav Dawra , Clarence Filsfils , Ketan Talaulikar , Mach Chen , Daniel Bernier , Bruno Decraene
I-D last updated 2022-12-07
Completed reviews Opsdir Early review of -08 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Adrian Farrel (diff)
Secdir Early review of -09 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -12 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -12 by Timothy Winters (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Timothy Winters
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext by Internet Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/ySrqiaMNy_ZCMkdKv3Sx8x5KW80
Reviewed revision 12 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2022-12-07
review-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-12-intdir-telechat-winters-2022-12-07-00
I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area
Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just
like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve
them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more
details on the INT Directorate, see
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>.

Based on my review, if I was on the IESG I would ballot this document as No
Objection.

This document is well written but has lots of information in a document of this
size due to the many dependencies and references. My only editorial comment is
I would suggest a terminology section as there are lots of acronyms that aren't
defined in the document. Having a background in Routing, this wasn't a problem
for me but might be for other readers.

- Tim Winters