Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08
review-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08-genart-lc-housley-2022-12-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-12-13
Requested 2022-11-29
Authors Peter van Dijk , Libor Peltan , Ondřej Surý , Willem Toorop , Kees Monshouwer , Peter Thomassen , Aram Sargsyan
I-D last updated 2022-12-03
Completed reviews Dnsdir Last Call review of -08 by David Blacka (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Catherine Meadows (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/V-jMkADwNBpUN-H4TyNcC_RdTwg
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 09)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2022-12-03
review-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08-genart-lc-housley-2022-12-03-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2022-12-03
IETF LC End Date: 2022-12-13
IESG Telechat date: unknown


Summary: Almost Ready


Major Concerns: None


Minor Concerns:

The document lacks an IANA Considerations section.  Please add one,
even if it says that there are no actions for IANA and asks the
RFC Editor to remove the section when the document is published.
Such a section provides clarity during IANA review of the document.

Section 3 says:

   Catalog consumers MUST ignore any RR in the catalog zone which is
   meaningless to or otherwise not supported by the implementation.

I am unsure what is meant by "meaningless".  Please define the term
or provide some explanation.


Nits:

Section 2 provides a list to definitions.  Please add some form of
punctuation after the word being defined (a colon or a hypen or
something else to aid the reader).


Note:
   
I did not review Appendix A or Appendix B.