Attendees:   

Sub-group Members:   Alan Greenberg, Avri Doria, Cheryl Langdon-Orr, Greg Shatan, Klaus Stoll, Akinori Maemura, Robin Gross

Staff:  Bernard Turcotte, Berry Cobb, Brenda Brewer, Patrick Dodson

Apologies:  George Sadowsky

** If your name is missing from attendance or apology, please send note to acct-staff@icann.org **



Transcript

Recording

Agenda

1. Intro: agenda review, attendance, SOI check

2. Substantive issue/s of the week

● Report v1.2 - discuss/accept the open edits. 

Does the group accept this as the working version for reading?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vH5su7SDGE0i_rTstbYJ7tIaOFuRnV4dfqpwMTPoYa8/edit?usp=sharing 

3. Documents Update

3.1 Report - Rev 1.1

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B4C745NEsGNqMnp0eHA0eDVoTDQ/view?usp=sharing 

3.3. Supplement to Report - Draft 06 - 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Vqz7RDHgazhZfIVyv5tzAbtQfgLACqV-wGD7xPX9-w8/edit?usp=sharing

No longer a working document

3.2. Response to Staff Questions - pending review and readings https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ELuw6i3mGAjnZBe0Vc_lraNQrWw5m_I6UyipEHaRJxc/edit?usp=sharing 

3.3 Board’s and other issues on Report Draft 1.1

Issues list can found at:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QsW8VUd6dCTu4LlE8IWsP9ioQUPTARhfh9-BfHGbA8s/edit?usp=sharing 

3.4 Staff Accountability Checklist

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f_RTQpJppjHF_sfzbE9vHE_EaiEmIjzIfYRcBoD6Ax8/edit?usp=sharing 

Action Items

● Patrick to update draft based on his comments

4. Schedule update - Needs updating

● Document for Plenary Readings

○ 1st  18 Oct Delivered by 11 Oct

○ 2nd 27 Oct  Delivered by 20 Oct (23 stretch)

● Public comment period : Dec

● Absorb comments and adjust proposals - 

● Abu Dhabi meeting - end October

● Out of Time - June 2018

Updated meeting schedule:

● 30 Aug 1900 UTC

● 13 Sep 0500 UTC

● 28 Sep 1300 UTC

 5. AOB

Raw Captioning Notes

Please note that these are the unofficial transcript. Official transcript will be posted 2-3 days after the call

Decisions:

  • Draft document accepted for a first reading by the sub-group with some suggestions for improvement.

Action Items:

  • AD will review the document to include the edits discussed and the revised document will be presented to the sub-group for its second ready at the next meeting scheduled for 13 September (documents for the September plenary are due on 20 September).

Requests:

  • (None)

Documents Presented

Chat Transcript

Brenda Brewer: (8/30/2017 10:16) Good day and welcome to WS2 Staff Accountability Subgroup Meeting #27 on 30 August 2017 @ 19:00 UTC!

  Brenda Brewer: (10:16) If you are not speaking, please mute your phone by pressing *6 (star 6). To unmute, *6. This call is recorded.

  Brenda Brewer: (10:17) Reminder to all, for captioning and transcription, please  state your name before speaking and speak slowly.  Thank you!

  Bonnie-CART: (11:50) Hello, Brenda!  Can you please tell me who the rapporteur will be for this meeting?

  Brenda Brewer: (11:50) Avri Doria

  Bonnie-CART: (11:51) Thank you!

  Cheryl Langdon-Orr (CLO): (11:58) hi all

  Bernard Turcotte - ICANN: (11:59) hello all

  Cheryl Langdon-Orr (CLO): (11:59) hi

  Alan Greenberg: (12:00) Or quickly cancel before someone else arrives!

  avri doria: (12:01) i thought it was 5@5

  avri doria: (12:01) which looks like SOS and it is what we will need to send out if we can't move forward.

  Bernard Turcotte - ICANN: (12:02) wwe have 5 participants so we are good to go Avri

  avri doria: (12:02) Thanks Bernie.

  Cheryl Langdon-Orr (CLO): (12:07) all good

  Alan Greenberg: (12:07) URL for Doc?

  avri doria: (12:08) https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1vH5su7SDGE0i-5FrTstbYJ7tIaOFuRnV4dfqpwMTPoYa8_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwICaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=kbiQDH54980u4nTPfwdloDLY6-6F24x0ArAvhdeDvvc&m=FTsg2-bkn4tIdz_fRm8mqr1pN2JtOkDu7gRhpRhZKD4&s=bcon7Dr0laPaKlel9_XnPuQtljtsWpDzsRc6jiQtTv4&e=

  Patrick Dodson: (12:13) the thanks paragraph is moved to the end of the document. wasn't removed completely.

  Patrick Dodson: (12:20) i'm also wondering if the supplemental document will further detail out that information

  Brenda Brewer: (12:25) document now has scroll for all

  Cheryl Langdon-Orr (CLO): (12:26) not at this stage

  Patrick Dodson: (12:27) i think remove "a"

  Cheryl Langdon-Orr (CLO): (12:30) I was typing.... these are all accepted IMO

  Cheryl Langdon-Orr (CLO): (12:31) makes sense

  Cheryl Langdon-Orr (CLO): (12:36) footnote works as defined in guidelines

  Cheryl Langdon-Orr (CLO): (12:36) yep

  Patrick Dodson: (12:36) i think it would, yes

  Patrick Dodson: (12:37) i think just in general being more clear about what areas we need these guidelines will help

  Patrick Dodson: (12:38) in the re-working might these two items collapse into a single ask?

  Cheryl Langdon-Orr (CLO): (12:38) hmm

  Cheryl Langdon-Orr (CLO): (12:39) ok as is perhaps

  Patrick Dodson: (12:39) just thinking if we talk to guidelines and get specific it might resolve itself

  Patrick Dodson: (12:41) i like Avri's suggested comment for the thank you paragraph

  Klaus Stoll: (12:41) I support Avris version

  Cheryl Langdon-Orr (CLO): (12:41) believed by is ok

  Patrick Dodson: (12:49) can we define a scenario that would require the exerciing of the panel?

  Patrick Dodson: (12:49) i fear without a use case we will lose validity.

  Klaus Stoll: (12:50) How will the empowered community choose its representative?

  Bernard Turcotte - ICANN: (12:51) time check - 9 minutes left in call

  Patrick Dodson: (12:51) maybe under the recommendations on accountability mechanisms we suggest that ICANN organization clearly establish and communicate a mechanism for addressing topics that fall into the remit of any one mechanim.

  Klaus Stoll: (12:53) I like the idea

  Patrick Dodson: (12:53) I think it will be more welcomed if we frame the need and ask organization to evaluate and propose a solution.

  Cheryl Langdon-Orr (CLO): (12:54) fine

  MAEMURA Akinori: (12:55) Thank you for hte edit on the panel point.  It's much better and understandable.

  Cheryl Langdon-Orr (CLO): (12:57) excellent

  Greg Shatan: (12:58) Wonderful first reading, all!

  Patrick Dodson: (13:00) Was happy to help out.

  Klaus Stoll: (13:00) Thanks all, Thanks Patrick

  MAEMURA Akinori: (13:00) Thank you very much all!

  Bonnie-CART: (13:00) Thank you!



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